Countrymon: Tiverian Empire

Countrymon: Tiverian Empire
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Seems like you failed on that part "don't start a trend of people making Countrymon of their OC's".
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Actually, if you count the countryballs comics that is NOT countrymon, This is my fiftyeith too. what a coincidence
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*Illuminati theme plays*
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Hope you didnt mid if I took your making of my oc and redrawed it a little
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I don't mind, but my complete thoughts on it is somewhere in that maelstrom of text down below. Hope ya find it down there!
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Well, I have LOTS to say about this, where should I start...? Consider this as my review, both artistically and conceptually. Again, where to start...? First, I see that you tried to make your text more fancy at the top by making it more curly and stuff. I don't mind, but I recommend putting more focus on serifs instead. They give text more of a fancy, ancient, sacred feel (kinda like Latin, which I use for that purpose). Secondly, I'm kinda miffed by my drawing being stretched and altered, with the beret I put being replaced by another hat. But, slightly disturbed is as far as it goes, which means I don't really mind, either. But, I would be fine with drawing the altered OC myself, with the bigger scale and everything. Thirdly, I really liked the countries you put at the corners. They all look so smooth, and the interiors were well drawn. Overall, this isn't the end of it and I STILL have more to say, but I would shove those in another comment since this comment has become a too big of a block of text.  blahblah
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PLS MAKE A COUNTRYMON OF ME
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Umm... I dunno... I still don't want to start a trend or something...  blink
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btw u guys look like america and russia, there will be a cold war between u 2
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Really? I always thought I was some backwater island country like Vanuatu that no one pays attention to and isn't really that relevant.  blink
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https://i.imgur.com/yqoqNEu.png

Another thing I've noticed and thoroughly analyzed and looked at, is that this card is WAY bigger than my card. Seriously, and we both use MS Paint. Your card is 3x bigger than mine, so to speak. My comics and art are usually size so that I can see all of it barely fit on the screen at 200x zoom. So, I resized my card, and I also found out that this card has some a lot of similarities with my own card. If these two cards we're put together side by side (hence the link above), one could see why. The backgrounds are their flags, the holding place for the countrymon are their coats of arms (while mine is completely white in the interior to make it look like an image), there is a crown above on said both coats of arms (while my crown is actually in the coat of arms), there are weapons lodged in the coats of arms, and there are banners and text in both coats of arms. Both Stat and Move boxes are designed as shields (while mine has crowns above both of them). There are differences however, in these cards. In your card, the all but 1 "banners" are made with rectangle tool. As such, there is no triangle end in your banners. The top banner in your card shows the countrymon's name, and not his/her state motto like mine, and instead is shown at your crown, while my main crown shows my countrymon's name, and my top banner shows my state motto. Your Stat and Move boxes were also tool made, and the text inside of them were made with text tool, unlike my mouse-written text. These all can be summed up into one big difference, and beforehand, I apologize for saying this, I mean no ill-will and offense in what I am about to say, I hope that you don't take it as a punch to the gut. It's the "quality". My countrymon card was mostly mouse-made and drawn. I never used a tool aside from the outer card shape. Yours was made with mostly tools, but again, I don't mind, and am also not trying to insult you, and have no intentions of doing so with anyone on this site. Though, I am tempted to redraw this completely mouse-drawn and such, like my own countrymon / OCmon. Lastly, the things drawn at the corners of your cards are instead other countries (which were well drawn, btw), which are related to your own OC, since they are all Axis Powers (Yes, I read your OC's backstory and everything), but you could have also taken inspiration from my UK countrymon. I know that this probably seem like some hate comment, but it isn't. I'm flattered and a bit surprised that you think of my barely decent content as "high quality", and as good enough examples to be taken inspiration from. Hopefully, this is all that I could nitpick from this countrymon thing. Should I end this like some letter? Ah, to heck with it. This comment is a big enough block of text to be scrolled down, for crying out loud!

Cheers!,
Zathukoslaviaball.
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I regret everything.
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well, My Oc is really a facist italy in the sea but actually competant, the simularities is obiously because; have you seen pokemon cards that the structure is really different when they are from the same era? the typing is cause I am NOT good at drawing letters in paint and I was NOT ready to write all that by hand
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I obiously took much inspiration from yours because of the reason above
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I suspected that it was because you were too lazyy to come up with the layout of the card on your own or something, tbh. I also forgot to mention that your stats also are based from my stats, and not at actual pokemon or other countrymon. I suspect that this time, I think that you didn't want your OC or yourself to be presented as inferior to my own OC and myself. So, you would compare my stats, and try to make your own stats higher, but for some reason. Like your HP and defense, but I don't really mind, since I would probably do the same if you submitted your OCmon first, and regret it. Now, I regret uploading my OCmon, or that could just be my paranoia or something.
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Well, I saw it logical, It has a skyhigh defence cause it is a island in the middle of the atlantic with a enormous navy, so it makes sense with high def. The HP I simply based on the size of the country, matching ukraine
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Okay, but the defense doesn't have to be THAT high. Yes, with that defense, your defense that would be high, but I view that as somehow too much. Based on your hp logic, my OC's hp should have been higher since it is something like a colonial empire, probably as big as the British Empire on its zenith... My OC's too op...
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Didint you say that ur OC was a backwater islandcountry?
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Uhh, no. I compared MYSELF to Vanuatu, not my OC. Ugh. To give ya some context on how big my OC actually is (which I still think is ridiculous), here's a map:

https://i.imgur.com/udiOqGt.png
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WHAT THE ACTUAL ****

what does these colours mean
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Basically, all of the colored are my OC's territory. The gold dot is the capital.
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