KazNATO

KazNATO
Views: 174 | Added by: Ratchet535
Total comments: 3
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I have made the text bigger and some minor changes. Does this one look better?

P.S. Does not look like a mess now, right?
P.P.S. I was trying not to make such a mess as it was in 'Axis fortress'
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It is far better in terms of messiness, still, try to make the different dialogues with some space from eatchother, also, when making text that is not a dialogue, make that a bit more clear by making them far off the side or greatly separated. I think you should try to improve your artstyle and try to spend a bit more time on the balls. It looks very obvious what tool you used which is not optimal, also try to get a curve on the patterns, they are balls, not circles
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Spheres*
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